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Wow! I love it and want more!

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This story is brilliant, Debbi. I hope it becomes a story in a longer NIF.

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Thank you Cheryl. Hmmm who knows?... x

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The story captures the jarring dissonance of modern life, weaving strands of the everyday that elicit a wide range of emotions in the reader and leaves them unsure of the character's future, yet not despairing for her. Intriguing.

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