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Ann Kelcey's avatar

What a powerful and moving story

Amanda Saint's avatar

It’s wonderful, isn’t it! So glad you enjoyed it.

Sam Hill's avatar

Absolutely beautiful 😍 Honestly have a lump in my throat reading this. The raw grief in the memories is powerful.

Jennifer Riggan's avatar

I love the tone.

Peter McMurran's avatar

Well done! Especially enjoyed the passage regarding his hands.

Raina Henderson's avatar

You teleport readers directly into the scene. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing.

Eamon O’ Leary's avatar

Beautifully written. Well done.

Elly Marie (she/her) 🏳️‍🌈's avatar

Felt tenderness through all of this writing. Thankyou for sharing.

Pattay Lesher's avatar

Just so powerful and touching my heart and soul.

Runs Through Life's avatar

What a beautiful story. A closet is such a powerful setting for a story - the smells that linger and the objects that are held within them. Loved this piece!