‘Hey what else can you do?’That first paragraph too every ounce of my breath to read. The intensity was palatable. And I loved how you used the same beginning for the last two paragraphs. Everyone tells you not to use the same word in such a short piece. Shows you what ‘everyone’ knows. Brilliant writing.
‘Hey what else can you do?’That first paragraph too every ounce of my breath to read. The intensity was palatable. And I loved how you used the same beginning for the last two paragraphs. Everyone tells you not to use the same word in such a short piece. Shows you what ‘everyone’ knows. Brilliant writing.
Thank you Virginia. I appreciate your comments.