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Caroline Crowley's avatar

A gently powerful story for the times we live in, for the turning from the old patriarchal order to the planetary era of reconnection and wholeness.

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Amanda Saint's avatar

Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts, Caroline. I loved this story instantly when I read it.

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The Short Tall Letter's avatar

This is great deft story-telling and I can't wait to read more by this writer.

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Emma Williamson's avatar

Wonderful piece. Would love to read more by this writer

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Kirsten's avatar

Beautiful and moving. Every word was a gift.

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Laura Doward's avatar

This is so beautiful; a masterclass in micro fiction that made me feel so much in such a short space.

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Gracie's avatar

Beautifully economical and pared back but still emotionally loaded, I loved it

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Jennifer Howze's avatar

Lovely piece and so tight and self-assured in execution.

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Amanda Saint's avatar

Thanks Jennifer. So glad you enjoyed it.

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