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Lynn Overend's avatar

BANG

The champagne cork goes flying, ricocheting off the ceiling, leaving a pale dent above the door.

Applause follows, like an audience at curtain call.

I pour straight into iridescent coupes, purple-pinkish shimmer, the kind gifted for anniversaries.

The divorce papers lay unsigned on the counter, patient as guests who know the ending.

Later, I studied that crater in the plaster.

Tiny impact.

Astonishing what passes for celebration.

As if I haven’t just uncorked the silence.

Ian Coldicott's avatar

BANG ON TIME

Arriving at the station that evening, I could see my train pulling away. I looked up at the Live Departure Board. Apparently it was running bang on time. That’s perplexing, as I was ten minutes early.

I asked at the ticket office. There had been “temporary technical anomalies”. I lost my temper. I had missed my train. It was an hour till the next one.

Cursing, I checked my watch. It was ten minutes slow.

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