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H Heywood's avatar

Great idea, plenty of unseen twists, inc the ending. The depiction of grief is unusual but effective. An absorbing story.

Jozzie Velesig's avatar

What a beautiful, unexpected, and accurate depiction of grief.

Eli M.'s avatar

I enjoyed the writing style immensely, as I did the other aspect of the story: the mountain of grief, the subtle world-building, the presence of the dead that lingers throughout the story. The ending made me tear up.